Dear Class,
Today we worked on our rough drafts, working in particular on our thesis statements and topic sentences.
We talked about ordering your paper, and how you can separate your paragraphs by analyzing appeals to ethos, logos, and pathos, or analyze the piece chronologically, or analyze how each strategy works towards multiple appeals in each paragraph. You could also order it based on the rhetorical triangle: author, text, then audience. Now working towards a second draft, you should start to see a natural order emerging and work on honing that order.
Homework is to work on your second draft, due Thursday, April 5. Final drafts are due Tuesday, April 10.
Have a great weekend,
Janel
P.S. The trick for rhetorical analysis is to make sure you are analyzing not only what they are saying/showing, but how they are effectively or ineffectively building their argument and why (to what effective, for what purpose, and for whom).